#1
This is a song that has been in the works for a while. Please crit, thank you.

Kick the habit, love's the drug you're dealing
And I'm addicted to the feeling
Just when I think that I am healing
You kick me, I am over keeling
Oh babe, I only try to hurt you
Lady you strip me of my virtue
I don't know where I'm meant to go to
You pin me I am like a voodoo
You take me from the ordinary
I am the little cave canary
You are the rocks of which I'm wary
Your burden's more than I can carry
I see the looks you give the others
Your looks to me are like a mothers
You make great rivals of my brothers
The act you put on only seems to smothers

If I had just one more chance
One more chance to make it right
I would not turn and run
I would put up a fight
If I had to run again
I wouldn't come right back
Spy and sneak and watch and learn
I'd beat you off the track

Kick the habit, that is what I'm doing
The drug that you continue brewing
All those you hurt are mental stewing
And I am left with the undoing
You turn, and you pull out your dagger
Towards you, every man does stagger
You adopt quite a girly swagger
Rock them you do it like Mick Jagger
I stand and yell loud my only order
Do not go near that womans border
She'll lock you like she is a warder
And her ways will give you a disorder
They follow me, and don't desire
The call of you, you siren and you choir
To get your way you are a liar
You take them low, but I just take them higher

If I had just one more chance
One more chance to make it right
I would not turn and run
I would put up a fight
If I had to run again
I wouldn't come right back
Spy and sneak and watch and learn
I'd beat you off the track

And now it's gone
I can't go on
And read you all your wrongs
I put right
Back where it is
Back where it belongs

Kick the habit, that is what I have done
And while we both had a little fun
You must turn, and with haste you run
In this fued, it seems that I have won
#3
yeah parts of it are really really good, and some parts could use some work. or you could just cut out the other parts and it'd be okay
ferret.