#1
first song in a very..i repeat very long time so im a bit rusty..even tho i wasnt that good neways lol...its abit emo..i dont like that part of it...i also wrote it about 2 min ago in a very short period of tmie so its not edited or nething..i hate the end..and suggestions on it???


I just want to let you know.
I hope you never go.
I just wanted to let you know.
Your always in he back of my head.
No matter what she said.

She was just a one night thing.
A fluke.
A mistake.
A little ding.
In what we had.

Just take your sweet time.
And never forget.
Your always on my mind.
No need to leave your heart behind.

Cuz your printed in my mind.
A doctrine of my kind.
The doctine of the hopeless romantics.
Thats what you are.

Your the girl we left behind.
But are always on our mind.
We wish to have you back.
So much tha we cant even act.

We find other girls.
To supress the feelings you left us with.
You leave us dreaming.
Of just one kiss.

You dont want to go.
But we both know.
You'll leave me someday.
I dont think there will ever be a way.

I try and make this work.
But your just being a jerk.
I beg and beg to no avail.
One day you'll recieve a note in the mail.

"I've tried so hard to make this right.
But I've just lost my will to fight.
You meant so much to me.
But now my life doesn't mean **** to me."
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#2
i like it. yea, the end does need work... hmm... let me think on it and ill get back w/ some suggestions if i think of any. good altogether tho!

-Ann
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#3
yeah thanks Ann and Senses Fail187..get a life... still nothing tho on the end..man im frustrated..neone else?
Quote by RockerPseudonym

Under Influence: A weird look
Minor Posession(A gram or two): Confiscation
Possession w/ intent to distribute(Lots, all bagged out): Jail.
The look on your face when the dealer tells you it's laced with crack: Priceless