#1
Recorded this in one take, bad pick slide in the beginning

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Last edited by Kizashmir at Aug 14, 2006,
#2
Yo man its not bad. I couldnt play that fast...but it sounds different maybe a bit out of tune. Even so, it's amazing that you even have the skill to attempt this and pull it off quite well. Nice job. 8/10.
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#3
needs alot of work, on other things more than hot for teacher, it was okay, keep workin on it
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#4
I like the cough at the beginning, and pick slide that sounds like someones choking a chicken , but it sounds pretty good other then that
#5
Its good. Theres just some timing issues, but other than that, very nice job. I also checked out your attempt on Dimebag's cowboys solo, and it was pretty good too. It sounds like you are really coming along and have a lot of potential.
#6
Quote by fridzeppelin
I like the cough at the beginning, and pick slide that sounds like someones choking a chicken , but it sounds pretty good other then that


choking a chicken...
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#7
well your going too fast on the tapping, your not with the rythem. its not consistant throughout the entire thing.

keep working on it, listen to the original to hear what i mean. eddie doesn't go as fast as you.
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#9
The notes are right but it is phrased wrong.
I think you're doing too much with the tapped notes, slow those down a bit.

This is what it sounds like:
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(sorry for tone)

P.S.- not trying to be a jerk or anything, but this is how you phrase it. I am trying to help
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#10
ur missing notes in the tapping! its t12p7p3p0h3h7t12
ur just doing t12p7p3p0t12p7p3p0