#1
All day
Your sitting in your darkened room
Wasting away
Waiting for a time thats soon

Oh, you prey
Prey for that one and only
But that prey is useless, 'cause today
Forever more, You are mine

The time is coming
Hide under your sheets
Time to start running
Your on the brink of defeat, yeah ..

The snake, of despair
Wraps around your helpless body
Fear ..
Drives you insane
You are nobody

The door slams shut
No way out
What do you do
When you cannot get through?

The time is coming
Hide under your sheets
Time to start running
Your on the brink of defeat, Yeah

Yeah, yeah, yeah ...

That time ... is now
Today, Forever more
Cannot escape
From your unrelieving body of hate
You are mine
The time is now!

The time is coming
Hide under your sheets
Time to start running
Your on the brink of defeat, Yeah

There it is, tell me what you think. All crit is welcome
The Darkness is Coming ... For some there will be no more, but for the others ..... PARTY!!!!
#2
It looks like it could be a decent metal song....Why don't you really see happy songs in here? Still, decent idea and all!
#3
Seems alright, could work...

Reminded me of that wigger Cena. - YOU CAN'T SEE ME! MAH TIME IS NAOWWW!!!
*shrugs* I don't know...
#4
Monkey Dancer: Thanks :: Haha, yeah i got some more 'happier' lyrics, but im not that good at writing love-style songs, but i might post them see what people think, only way to know for sure isnt it

Jaykib: Thanks aswell, but why .. oh why, did you say it reminded you of that!! lol

Thanks again anyways
The Darkness is Coming ... For some there will be no more, but for the others ..... PARTY!!!!