#1
I need some feedback on this song, all comments welcome

thanks,
Jen

Addiction, Addiction
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You left me filled with desire,
a feeling of wanting more.
I know I really needed you,
but I couldnt say that anymore.

Addiction addiction,
I always felt the need,
Addiction addiction,
You are forever here with me.

They said I dont need you,
I said I wanted more.
You told me you were dangerous,
And I felt compelled to dive.

Addiction addiction,
I always felt the need,
Addiction addiction,
You are forever here with me.

I know I need you now,
I know I need you,
You are my addiction.
And you're forever here with me.
#4
I tried adding more but nothing would fit right, I might try again later.

It is repetitive, but with the music it works out pretty well.