#1
so lets not even try to wait
The pain's too much to bear
Can't you feel this love?
My heart is speeding like a bullet
I'm giving my all
And I remember

The sun sets on a cloudy day
It fits the scene in this dying world
My vision is going dark
you can be my savior
I'm drowning in my own despair

Let's drown together.
In a hazy world.
Let's drown together.

We'll look at them from above
Watching them express their envy
They'll look like ants
as they destroy themselves

Let's Drown Together
In a hazy world.
Lets drown together.
Why dont we just
drown together.

I'll be the water
and you can be the victim
Lets just drown together.
We don't need this world.
"This shit here's called Death"
"What the fuck? You mean I'm gonna hit this shit and die?"
"No Nigga! I said Deaf. You hit this and you aint gonna hear shit!"
#4
No i posted it last week
"This shit here's called Death"
"What the fuck? You mean I'm gonna hit this shit and die?"
"No Nigga! I said Deaf. You hit this and you aint gonna hear shit!"
#5
Quote by JohnnyNapalm
No i posted it last week


Wow...lol you'll have to forgive me because I am not quiet myself right now. I getcha now.
#6
eh. a bit too emo for my taste. i say that you should keep words like despair, bullet, drowning, dying, etc. to a minimum and look in a thesaurus for ones with the same meaning. it sounds silly, yes, but that alone has helped me in my writing so much more than anything else. if you do that for a few songs, you develop a vocabulary thats really something to shake a stick at. but thats just my opinion.
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#8
Yeah, I should do that.

But I just kinda winged this song. i like it though. I like my other one better though. It took more thought.
"This shit here's called Death"
"What the fuck? You mean I'm gonna hit this shit and die?"
"No Nigga! I said Deaf. You hit this and you aint gonna hear shit!"