#2
Well, sounds like a ****ty mic...
There were wierd recording blips and skips and crap...the picking could be polished more.
Some of the strumming bits just seemed like you were forming random chords, it could use more of a theme to tie it all together. Vocals were a bit monotone and nasally.



EDIT:
http://star.walagata.com/w/crg23/thing.mp3
I'm not very active here on UG currently.
I'm a retired Supermod off to the greener pastures of the real world.
#3
Not too bad. with the exception of the mic. The vocals could be better but i actually like them the was that they are a lot. as i listened the vocals grew on me more and more. and yeah there were blips and stuff like the person above me mentioned.
Can you see in the dark? Can you see the look on your face?
#5
Yeah, the mic's pretty shoddy and it kept skipping, which was really annoying. The song's quite boring I'm afraid: there's no variation and the guitar is rather bland. Try using a multitracker like Audacity to overlay some backing guitar / vocals to add a bit of variation towards the end
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