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Ok so this song is one that my friend says is the best ive written. just wantin some feedback. i know its sounds kinda pop-ish but thats what i was listen to at the time.

Who ya gonna be today?
I already know what you'll say.
Its not so hard to understand.
I guess its not easy bein the man.
But you make it look so easy to everyone.
How much longer til your done?

[chorus]

Your doin what they want,
your sayin what they say.
As long as your liked, everythings ok!
No matter what you want they come first!
And you believe them thats whats worse!


It's a fairly simple concept if you ask me.
All your fake friends wont set you free.
The decisions you make are not your own
The first mistake means your gone.
How can you do the things you do?
It must be your way of getting through.

[chorus]

Your doin what they want,
your sayin what they say.
As long as your liked, everythings ok!
No matter what you want they come first!
And you believe them thats whats worse!


So try to make the best of a bad situation,
cling to their words without hesitation.
Who cares what you think, your not right.
And it sure beats the hell out of a lonely night.!

[chorus]

Your doin what they want,
your sayin what they say.
As long as your liked, everythings ok!
No matter what you want they come first!
And you believe them thats whats worse!

It's finally your turn to make a choice
Stand up and hear your own voice.
Make the most of this oppuritunity!
(or not)