#1
A friend of mine just killed himself, and i worked with him and I have to get up tomarrow for work, but I just cant fall asleep, too many things are running through my mind, so I got up and wrote this song. This is one of the most personal songs ive ever written. I'll return the favor if you crit it.

?Goodnight, Goodbye?

Tired eyes look upon himself
Breathing few breathes that he still has
Can he take much more of this?
A life that no one can feel
Reckless and beaten down
On his knees and unwound
Someone give him some hope

I need some sleep tonight
But it?s a million miles away
You were far too young
To put an end to your ways
I need some sleep tonight
Because tomarrow is another day
Goodnight, goodbye
Going to try to get some sleep?tonight

The world is no one?s home
But its not anybody?s grave
Selfish acts can?t solve your pain
Just leaves us all in the rain
That falls and falls from your mother?s eyes
Time for us still passes by

I need some sleep tonight
But it?s a million miles away
You were far too young
To put an end to your ways
I need some sleep tonight
Because tomarrow is another day
Goodnight, goodbye
Going to try to get some sleep?tonight
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#2
wow........thats incredible. My condolences to you and your friends family.
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justin, that was easily the most inspiring, helpful piece of advice anyone has ever given me in regards to my musical pursuits.


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