#1
Standard hard rock song I just whiped up

Not here for a long Time


Too many regrets and too many lies.
I wanna live my life,but I just need to get by.
I'm workin two jobs and Ive bearly got a home,
I'm about to say screw it, and and just go have some fun.

I'm to yung to worry I've got the rest of my life to live.


We're not here for a long time.
We'er here for a good one.
So say all your sorryes, and all of you good byes.
Cuz life dont last forever, But your memories will.

Sneakin into clubs. and out of houses.
running threw the allyways of my yung mind.
Ive got no where to go, and no were to sleep.
But I guess I'll keep diggin if my holes this deep.


We're not here for a long time.
We'er here for a good one.
So say all your sorryes, and all of you good byes.
Cuz life dont last forever, But your memories will.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SOLO~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

To much to worry about and not enough time.
Stayin up late and sleepin till dusk.
Stuck in this world,
And theres no way
OUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

We're not here for a long time.
We'er here for a good one.
So say all your sorryes, and all of you good byes.
Cuz life dont last forever, But your memories will.
#3
Interesting stuff dude,

but the point is, only write about stuff you know. For example, do you actually really have 2 jobs and barely a home.

And if you have an account of an internet guitar forum, im guessing you do have a place to stay and sleep.


10/10 for creativity man, but singing about being homeless when you arent, is like Christina Agularia singing in spanish.


Not gripeing man, you got tallent as a lyricist, and have a good feel for how a song is put together by the look of it.

Just write about what you know.
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#4
hey thanks better turn out than I thought , and yeah I know what you meant about the punk, I used to listen to Green Day but now im more Hard Rock (Ac/DC, and GnR ect)
#5
I could definately see this working as punk, but I'd much prefer to hear the metal version!
Actualy, it almost reminds me of Ozzy. Solo a la Wylde??
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#7
"We're not here for a long time.
We'er here for a good one."

A little too Trooper for me, but good.
#9
^^I can see it played kindof easy and melodic on the verses, maybe even acoustic, then chrunching with the chorus. Think 'Gets me Through.' I dunno...maybe not what you had in mind, but I think it would rock...
"He has a woman's name and wears makeup. How original."
--Alice Cooper, on Marilyn Manson.
#10
i like it, some good lines in htere with good imagery.....i dont like "I'm about to say screw it, and and just go have some fun." "screw it" should never be used in a song.....but i do like the song, classic feeling to it.....great creativity, and work.....you have lots of talent......and if you dont mind could you take a look at my song "seven years" thanks...
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