#1
http://media.putfile.com/generictylenol123

This is everything except the vocals. The lyrics are still a work in progress. Basically the song itself is about shelling out an extra buck or two just for the sake of a comfortable brand name. A little more serious in tone than anything I've ever written before. I'll post the finished product up later now. For now, tell me how it sounds.

Crit for crit! Just post a link

Also props to Mack56 for the bass track.
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#2
Not too shabby...few things:
Bass is a bit bland, it's just echoing the guitar. I'd try and work out something a little more interesting. Same thing with the drums really, the beat you have going would be nice for an intro, but for most of the song I'd switch into a more regular beat.



LINK:
http://star.walagata.com/w/crg23/thing.mp3
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