This is a song I made today. I was going for a piano rock pop punk type thing. I'm not sure if I like the verses right now, let me know what you guys think about the song though, what I could improve on and stuff. Thanks
Not my usual style but it was ok...it was very pop-punkish..the verses were ok but you shuda but sum guitar in the 1verse...liked it tho....8/10...crit mine?in the sig
Last edited by chinospike at Aug 17, 2006,
Any more feedback?
it's a happy song