Nice, intro sounds good, drums sound work. There are a few skips in the recording...
Vocals are alright, when they get loud they go a bit "off" though. You could work on steadying your voice in those places. For the most part it was pretty good though. Guitar was fine. I noticed an off bend(I think). Some bass would be nice.

Crit mine please.
I'm not very active here on UG currently.
I'm a retired Supermod off to the greener pastures of the real world.
I like it, drums are nice, vocals are nice, and its got the chorus and stuff which mine lacked, good job overall.