#1
Watch everything she wears
the music moves her memories
as long as you dont hate
she wont remember your last name
so fake what you dont know
and copy every melody
youll be loved like a best freind
and forgotten like an enemy

slam closed the door
stand up for her highness
maybe shell let you, hide behind shyness
or lie between the stars
and there well fake our hours
alone
the motions you make
scream this doesnt feel great
who cares?
nobody wants to be happy anyway
(why be happy when you cant stay?)*muffled*
nobody wants to be happy anyway

Wake up from this dream
and get ready for bad looks
and bad taste
learn how not to sleep
maybe youll see how bad it really is
to be alive to to be alive to be alive
youll see how bad it is to be alive

slam closed the door
stand up for her highness
maybe shell let you, hide behind shyness
or lie between the stars
and there well fake our hours
alone
the motions you make
scream this doesnt feel great
who cares?
nobody wants to be happy anyway
why be happy when you can stay
nobody wants to live this way


so slam closed the door
stand up for her highness
i cant escape the moments so right yet
ill lie about the stars
and say theres millions more
right here
yet i know its only a dream
yet i know this is a dream

I still love my own dreams
Last edited by Hashmire420 at Aug 17, 2006,
#3
First off, thanks for the crit on mine .

Okay, the first verse is absolute magic. Especialy this part:

Watch everything she wears
the music moves her memories
as long as you dont hate
she wont remember your last name

But the rest of it kind of starts to fall off after that. I think it could be a little shorter and there's still some work to be done but it's really cool.
Can't say I was never wrong
But some blame rests on you


Work and play they're never okay
To mix the way we do