#1
Tired of waiting
For your fialed promieses
your fables that die
what was written to be a romance
ended at chapter two

your lies
weak
powerless
your cries
silent
hopeless

your peaceful dreams
turned to nightmare screams
blood and gore
is what there made for
haunting the places
of the hopeless faces

your lies(lies)
weak
powerless
your cries(cries)
silent
hopeless

your soul still remains
remians in flames
forced down to hell
when your life was the last thing to sell

tourtured with fear
your in the devils care
six six six is what we starve for
ascending to its core
#2
thats good stuff, im no pro lyric writer but i've noticed that alot of songs that don't ryhme, still sound really good
#3
Tired of waiting
For your fialed promieses
your fables that die
what was written to be a romance
ended at chapter two Thats not a brilliant but its a good enough start, i like it

your lies
weak
powerless
your cries
silent
hopeless And i love this

your peaceful dreams
turned to nightmare screams
blood and gore
is what there made for
haunting the places
of the hopeless faces and thats also really good, creepy, but really good

your lies(lies)
weak
powerless
your cries(cries)
silent
hopeless

your soul still remains
remians in flames
forced down to hell
when your life was the last thing to sell ok, now here i disliked it, disliked the repetition of remains just for the flo, and then selling your life to hell, its good, but i feel you could word it to sound better

tourtured with fear
your in the devils care
six six six is what we starve for
ascending to its core thats too much anger for me

overall its pretty good, i think i picked up some rhymes here, rucklust, but anyways nice song. im guessing a hardcore metal song?