#1
Shut the world off, you don't know why
Theres voices in my head, I wish they all die
My lights are off and I locked the door
The people in my head, delcared a war

There is war inside of me
I am my enemy
I am my army
I am my enemy

You should back off and just stay way
I am time bomb waiting to denote
And theres nothing you can do to stop it
I am the gun, and I am the target

There is war inside of me
I am my enemy
There is war inside of me
I am my enemy
Last edited by guitar? at Aug 17, 2006,
#2
Quote by guitar?
Shut the world off, you don't know why there are many other ways you could act this line and pull it off, that is not one of them, just seem to out of control feeling about the writer
Theres voices in my head, I wish they all die Die is a bit more harsh for them to go away IMO
My lights are off and I locked the door OK
The people in my head, delcared a war great ending for the first verse, summing the prolouge and entering the song

There is war inside of me
I am my enemy "i am my own enemy" is getting pretty old but i dont see how you could NOT use it here
I am my army
I am my enemy

You should back off and just stay way stoped talking about yourself, or do you? great mystery
I am time bomb waiting to denote "Bomb" is an old metaphore
And theres nothing you can do to stop this sort of line never gets old for me
I am the gun, and I am the target great line, partying you

There is war inside of me
I am my enemy
There is war inside of me
I am my enemy


It's a basic song coming to life, if you work on it you'll have a great track.
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#4
^^well the title is one word so he cant really steal it, since its a different song too.

He is correct tho, a lot of songs like this, but as long as its the persons own then there is nothing wrong with it. Otherwise there would be nothing to write about anymore.
This Armor Plated Raging Beast
Born of Steal and Metal
It Will Survive Against All Odds
Stampeding On Forever...

Judas Priest- Heavy Metal
#5
Quote by Descendent-182
you stole the title war


Look, you moron. Search for a song named 'You'. How many friggin' songs are called like that? Once you tell me that, I'll stop calling you a little bitch. Little bitch.

For the rest of you: I wuv you! *hugs*