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First piece I wrote in... .... a long while. Crit for Crit.

Inside and Outside

We look how we look -
there?s not much you can do
but your soul so I?m told:
It?s the best part of you

Funny then how it seems
When I meet someone new
so quickly we?re judged
By just an outside view

But that?s the way things are
And ?things? never change
In a world were hate buds
And love seems so strange

Enjoy!
"Life is like a tale, what matters is not its length but its value"