#1
*Well, I mostly write hard rock and blues, but this song just seems more metal to me. Very dark subject matter that I normally don't mess around with, but I had a very wierd nightmare the other night, and I was inspired to write it. Barely any edits have been made. Please tell me what you think, thanks.*

Juggalo Killer, by Lucas Perry.

JUGGALO KILLER!!! JUGGALO KILLER!!!


He was a high school loser,
You probably never knew him.
Always kept to himself,
Only his mother loved him.

Then one day, on a walk in the park,
Kids with painted faces suddenly appeared,
From the trees and the bushes where they lurked.
The next thing he knew, his life disappeared.

Woke up in the hospital,
Got a call on the telephone.
His father had just called,
said, "son your mother's gone."

Then next thing, he stormed out of that bed,
Refused suicide, he wanted revenge instead.
Next clown he saw would be shot in the head,
Then those responsible, would all be found dead!

JUGGALO KILLER!!! Getting his revenge tonight.
JUGGALO KILLER!!! Slaughtered every last one in sight!

When he had gotten rid of that scum,
He slept all too well that night,
Felt no remorse for what he had done,
There was no turning back, he'd continue the fight!

Now with the juggalos, word spread so quick,
They all heard the stories, all felt the fear,
Saw in their minds, the blood running thick,
All knew that soon, their lives'd disappear.

Now with a bloodlust, he sought after more.
Burned all the hangouts, crashed all the gatherings!
Found a juggalette, and killed the little *****!
The days of the clowns were quickly numbering.

JUGGALO KILLER!!! Getting his revenge tonight.
JUGGALO KILLER!!! Slaughtered every last one in sight!

So they held up their hatchets,
but that never mattered.
They could cut up his digits,
Then their brains were scattered.

Now that every last one was dead,
Every last juggalo in that town,
The demons left from inside his head,
Then the cops found him and finally shot him down.

JUGGALO KILLER!!! Getting his revenge tonight.
JUGGALO KILLER!!! Slaughtered every last one in sight!
JUGGALO KILLER!!! Getting his revenge tonight.
JUGGALO KILLER!!! Slaughtered every last one in sight!

END.
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#2
You should change the line "JUGGALO KILLER" to "THE JUGGERNAUT BITCH"
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People don't like Dave Mustaine because he created something that owned Metallica in just about every single aspect of thrash metal.


it's true
#4
i hope you take this as constructive criticism dude but i agree with the dude above me...this song blows...to say the least...but first of all you shouldnt write a song about the fan base of icp and twiztid thats just stupid
#5
I accept the criticism. I normally don't write like this. It was just something different, and I wanted to see what people thought of it.
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