#1
Songbird Copyright 2006 James Dolan

In the forest sings a robin
of the innocence and peace
thats still left here
among all the trees
long ago from me it was torn
ripped from my soul
on the breezes it was born
i know it wont return

if i had followed others steps
the ones with work and toil
would i have flown into the sky
or crashed into the soil?

in the forest sings a sparrow
of a love returned
that was lost but now is found
into my soul you're burned
thoughts of never finding you
have been slashed away
now that i have found your love
and know its here to stay

if i had followed others steps
the ones with work and pain
would it have been worth this trip
or was this trip in vain?

in the forest sings a songbird
of happiness and smiles
that keeps me going
through all the trails
#2
Uh if u was a female i'd make sweet love to you.
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#6
I wrote "songbird" and here's another song i wrote


"Crank up the Gauge" Copyright 2006 James Dolan
A song plays on the radio
beat and rhythm strong
bringing back my memories
when i hear this song
i remember hearing this
as a younger kid
then is when i met my love
and had my first kiss

So crank up the gauge
and my soul stirrs
time walks with age
and mem'ry returns

i remember how i cried
when we fell apart
and no matter how i tried
i couldnt fix my heart
i still remember how we loved
a love beyond all rhyme
i always thought that we would love
til the end of time


So crank up the gauge
and my soul stirrs
time walks with age
and mem'ry returns

Comment song #2 :-D
#9
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got 8 strings.
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#10
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that is the greatest critique i have ever seen and I'm cereal

super cereal?

Damn dude,that was good. I'm also 13 and our band has written some pretty good songs(but none as complex)
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