#1
Hello again.. Its been a long time since i've posted a song of mine.. I'll do it now. ! :P So this is a new song called Appointment with the gallows and you can find it HERE ..
I want to know What you think about this new song and I also want to crit back !
So leave your song after you crit so I can crit it.
PS: Sometimes I get A little lost from all the links and I dont crit all of them . I'll try to crit as many as I can.
Peace.


This is a studio work . If you dont like the sound and the mastering , dont blame me , lol !!
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Last edited by Necrolust at Aug 18, 2006,
#2
This is really old school sounding. I like that clean part too. Overall it's an okay song. A little too plain for me. Play it faster and don't have that one breakdown. But I would listen to it again. Good job.

Crit: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=415714
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#4
that was quite...dark lol. Nice melodies and atmosphere. I liked the solo as well. Overall a strong track.
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#5
hey man, very evil:P haha i love the little runs you do they sound awsome, the drums sounded kinda ****ty quality wise in my opinion and it mightve been to echoy for my taste overall, but back to the song the clean part sounded great as well, and maybe the more metal parts could be speeded up a bit? i think itd make it sound that much better

please crit my song
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=416492 thanks
#6
I love the break at 2:35. That's solid as hell.

This isn't the type of music I normally listen to, but I can definitely appreciate it. I think a better recording would make this piece 100 times better.

I like the tone you got on the leadwork. I'd like to hear a little more shred in that spot. Your playing is good and you can definitely kick that section up a bit.
#7
that intro was sick as hell, all i have to really say is work on transitions, the tempo changes there seem kinda odd, that could probably change with vocals, but not sure. nice guitar tone, idk wat u did with drums (are they real?), but the clean part is nice. and im glad to hear a solo in one of your songs, that makes me happy :-D pretty good too. and sweet breakdown after, you are a killer metal riff writer. i love that riff after the break too, i just love this song, i would LOOOOOVe to hear some nevermore type vocals on this, killer track though

cfc? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=416423
dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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#8
Quote by The2abraxis
that intro was sick as hell, all i have to really say is work on transitions, the tempo changes there seem kinda odd, that could probably change with vocals, but not sure. nice guitar tone, idk wat u did with drums (are they real?), but the clean part is nice. and im glad to hear a solo in one of your songs, that makes me happy :-D pretty good too. and sweet breakdown after, you are a killer metal riff writer. i love that riff after the break too, i just love this song, i would LOOOOOVe to hear some nevermore type vocals on this, killer track though

cfc? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=416423


This song was recorded in a studio , all the guitars including the bass were played by me , the drums were real and they were played by someone who owns all greece with his playing. I mean he is awesome. I am working on the vocal lines but I cant write lyrics , i dont have inspiration to do that. But I have this to say . : THEY WILL KICK ASS ..
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#9
that was pretty heavy, im diggin the feel, sounds like soemthing from devil may cry, or Doom or something. its pretty sick, i liked it alot, the playing was clean, the quality was pretty good. i liked the clean break, it definately helped set the dark-tone to it. the solo was pretty good, could have been a little louder i think, it wasnt crazy shred like i thought it would be, it went quite nicely. crit for crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=416007
#11
only problem is the mixing. drums are sounding to forward in the mix, and the reverb or possibly just the eq on the guitars is pushing them back.. kills the mood of the song.

that drummer has some FECKING skills!

just got the solo, i like it.. but it needs some different tone so it realy wails through the mix. and some more dynamics with the lead would have been nice.

(the song is awsome, i'm just saying that on my monitoring speakers the mixing doesn't do it justice)
#12
I agree the tempo was too slow. The transitioning need work. The drums had a fake / cheesy sound. Not sure what effect you were using on the guitar scales that made it sound like a keyboard.. but that was disappointing. The song was kinda basic and dry, I didn't hear anything catchy... Maybe if you add vocals, it'll spice it up some.
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#13
You are a riffing beast. I like the tempo changes. I like songs that decrease and increase in bpm by a little, instead of going into true half time or double time. Yeah, the drums are odd sounding. You should have kept playing and started the fade out at the same place, but your playing came to a definite stop, and you can hear it in the fade out. This is really cool. I personally wouldnt know what to do with it singing-wise, but I'm sure somebody could make this cool.
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