#1
Ok this is a start of a song I may write. I want to know if it?s any good so far b4 I do more with it.
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#2
Measure four sounds a little weird, I would change that chord. Other than that, I like the first part. The second part is cool, too. Yeah, I'm sure you could change that into a pretty good song. Nice work.
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#3
Yes i dont like Measure four but i cant seem to think of anyhting that will fit there any ideas?
#6
Like...it doesn't seem to feel right in the progression, like before you even hear that chord, you have an idea in your head of how it should resolve to sound right, and that is close, but it's off by a little.
#7
like said before, the progression seems a tad off, but not really, and bar 5 was awesome, that was a good transition as well, crit mine you get a chance, its just an idea, Remains of the Night, or any of the other ones in my sig, thanks!!!