#1
I just kind of came up with this on the spot a few days ago, but I think it sounds kind of, well, gay. Opinions?
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#2
well personally i think you got something going there....
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#3
i'd trash it, even if you finish it and you think its good that doesn't take away from the fact that its just a bunch of random chords and notes
btw, i tried a song like this once, it didn't work very well, take it from experience
#5
Uh...sounds a little quirky, once that second guitar came in, I had the urge to bop my head up and down like a chicken. The only direction I can see this heading in is a 3rd guitar with another sound to add to the conglomeration
#6
"I had the urge to bop my head up and down like a chicken."
QFT

It sounds cool... It's catchy and flows nicely(at least, in my opinion, and I like odd stuff). I'd say find out what key it's in and keep going with it.. If nothing else, it can become a modern rock song.. lol
#7
I liked it, it had a cool beat going for it. Expand on it a little more, it sounds like it could begin something nice.
#8
Out of all these people 1 person dident like it...I like it so work on it but if you dont like it there is no point because you never get anywhere with it
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Uh...sounds a little quirky, once that second guitar came in, I had the urge to bop my head up and down like a chicken.
p.s. if you dont like it may i take it and expand on it?
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#10
its very happy, lol, i think you can take it somewhere, maybe have that intro go one more bar, and then add a nice melody, and get the ball rolling, cause with those chords and rhythm, you can only go so far, imo, could you crit mine, Remains of the Night its just an idea, or any of the ones in my sig, thanks!!!
#11
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p.s. if you dont like it may i take it and expand on it?

Sorry, no. If it's getting this many good reviews, it's MINE.
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