#1
ok, the name is completely dumb, imo, but its just a start, i wrote the main melody a long time ago, and i need to add bass, im planning to make it a lot longer, like stuff from DarkSonata, but let me know what you think, any comments are welcome and wanted, thanks for listening!!!

(midi is also included)
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Last edited by Schecter86 at Aug 19, 2006,
#7
i think the intro triplets are weird personally, they really interfere with the flow of the music. and i think u approached the piano too muhc like a guitarist... the piano isnt just a cool effect its a whole differnet instrument with its own vibe, id take total advantage of that
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#8
thanks ouchies, lol, and for sparks, lol, i am a guitarst, lol, but i know what you mean, and i agree, the piano, was just there for the intro, and then, i did a lot of changes, and it kinda stayed that through out the whole thing, but its just a work in progress, and this main riff is from so long ago, i have no idea where to take it, and ive had countless ideas, and this was the only decent one, imo, lol, but thanks for the comments!!!
#11
great, i really like the fade in, and great piano!
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#12
Hey, thanks for critting mine. I like this, I didnt really mind the triplets. I like the piano part in measure 15 the best, it has a cool vibe to it.
#14
I like how it sounds completely. The triplets are good. And the part is well written... The only thing I could hear/see, were the last 4 notes of the song. They sounded out of tune with each other, but other than that, good to go. =)
#15
yah, they do kinda clash, i put an extra little thing at the end to try and change it up, it sometimes sounds ok, and sometimes sounds off, lol, but i agree with you, and thanks for the crits!!!
#16
The song was pretty sweet...I liked it pretty much overall. It just needs to be longer since it is pretty short. As well, those 4 notes at the end do kinda clash
#18
i can see what you're trying to do with it but it just seems like there's somethign missing, and tbh i didnt notice any problem with the triplets at the beginning
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#19
Sounds cool to me, I always like good piano stuff. Triplets seemed fine, and the theme that started in measure 15 was the best part.
#20
Hey, in the intro, on the last bar (where the triplets were), I think you went out of key. I don't know if that was on purpose or not, it just didn't sound right. But other than that, it was good.
#22
yeah man piano is a different instrument and all so use that to your advantage. those triplets do sound weird though.
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#23
I liked it. The triplets were a little different, but that's not all bad. The part from measures 15-22 was my favorite. Nice work, keep adding to it.

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#24
That was pretty cool, to me it sounded like it would be a theme song for a show or something lol but thats just me. Overall excellent work, my favourite part is from bar 27 till the end, it sounds really good.
#26
wow that was good. kinda sounds like something Nobuo Uematsu (spelling?) would do! this definitely sounds professional and i cant think of anything else that could make it better.
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#31
hey, i like the feel of this song, for a midi it actually sounds pretty good. the background part goes really well with it, you should keep workin on it. thanks for the crit of spiral galaxy
#32
With the triplet part in the intro, what sounds bad is that 12th fret (B) note. That should be a Bb, 11th fret. Change it, and you'll see what I mean. You've got the right tonal idea in this piece, and I can really feel what you tried to do here. What I think you could really do is expand past straight 8th notes plus a few triplets, and get more syncopated, and add different rythm patterns.

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