#1
There's too many people
out there roaming the streets
and if you never slow down
how will you ever meet
the one who is meant to be
so

Sometime you should stop
look around and try to
find out whats the sound
that your hearing

But, if you stop for too long
you could just forget
where your going
and what you were
looking for in the first place

So if you have the time
open up your mind
to everything and everyone out there
and whenever you want you can
c'mon down, look at the sky
and unwind for a while
But I still think that

Sometimes we should stop
look around and try to
find out whats the sound
that we're hearing
#2
Hey, depending on the vocal melody this could work well for a pop/emo song.
Skemp

METAL UP YOUR ASS
#3
yea the vocals definately make it sound better than it looks and i was goin for like acoustic rock or sumthing but im really not sure yet but thanks man
#4
i think its a really cool song , i agree with Skemp its very well as pop/ emo song


Pyro
We have just 1 world but we live in different ones!
#6
i like this song but i wish i knew wat it sounds like, its awesome i love it!
If you don't like me for who i am
then don't like me for who i am...
but all your gonna get is who i am.
#8
Quite vague on the meaning, some parts seem like you're talking and gone rambling on into some philosophical rant.

I'd tighten up your ideas, make sure everything is pointing the right way, then move onto my next point. Add some metaphor and imagery, so that your writing comes alive. What you have here is very basic, bland lyrics. Use the idea and theme, but try to liven the piece up with the aforementioned techiniques.

So, good start, but it could be alot better.

If you'd are to take a moment to return, my latest is in my sig. Many thanks.
#9
Quote by joeacoustic114
yea the vocals definately make it sound better than it looks and i was goin for like acoustic rock or sumthing but im really not sure yet but thanks man



Yay acoustic rock, my genre
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