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Started out as a poem type thing but then i made more song like but w/e
please crit

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A girl sits in a room writing in her diary
Where she reminisces on her past and memories
Where as a child she would talk to the ghouls and ghosts
In a room flooded by light in a house so dark and cold
The ghosts would taunt her day by day and tell her she must go
But she was arrogant and foolish
She?s in that room on this very day
Staring at the black Figure in the middle of the room
She looks down to the diary and scribbles down these words

?If your gonna hurt me then kill me because I was a stupid girl
And I don?t think that after this I could re-enter the world
So do what you want I wont make a scene
Not that there would be anyone here to see
Let me fly demon
Let me die?

As she unburies the book from in front of her nose
She is greeted with a crooked smile from the silhouetted ghost
And he says,
?Your weaker than I thought young one get these thoughts out of your head
And to think that all this time I thought you knew you were dead
But I don?t care for your demands and only time will tell
So let me be the first to tell you welcome to hell.?
#2
If you're even going to attempt to write anything, know the difference between "your" and "you're."
#3
Quote by DeliriumTrigger
If you're even going to attempt to write anything, know the difference between "your" and "you're."


hahah

i just wanted to say that you might want to change to title, it soulds alot like she talkes to angels by the black crows