#1
Just improved the entire thing, the overall product makes me think it's worth the time it'll take me to actually learn it. Please, crit, I'll no matter what crit yours.
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#2
The harmonics that you used to punch in the chords, were a nice touch. I bet the intro would really benefit from some volume swells. Also, the lead part needs a bit more looking into. You have some very good note choice, it just needs to have more direction. Turn down the chorus just a little bit. It works very well with the song, but, at times, it can sound too muddy. I had the exact some problem, but, after much trial and error, I realized that effects can end up sounding very different when recorded (especially chorus/phaser/flanger stuff). A lot of the time, they end up being too strong.

You have a lot of very good ideas and it shows. Keep adding to it; I think it'll turn out great. The song I did has sort of the same style.

Check it out:

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=417327
Last edited by Acoustic#3 at Aug 19, 2006,
#3
I think it's kinda boring.

And I don't like the way the chorus sounds.

The solo isn't bad though, but it is very aimless, as was the case with the whole song.

You should give it a more defined theme that you can return to for a more "song-ish" feel.

It was pretty relaxing though, I'll give you that, it's just that it didn't seem to have a point to me.

Crit mine please?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=417279
#4
You had some interesting ideas here. Not very fond of the chorus effect though. This would've been pretty awesome with an acoustic.

Sounded like the tempo was all over the place, otherwise it was pretty swell playing. Some licks in the solo sounded a bit awkward though.

Good job!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=408975
#5
pretty good chord profression, the intro kinda drags on for a little

pretty cool solo too on it, ince feel to it

like said before, u should add a theme, itll give it ore structure.

i like the second solo, i didnt see it coming, makes the song more interesting.

i guess if u wanted to make it more instrumentalish, throw something in the intro, and you willhave yourself a pretty cool song

cfc? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=416423
dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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