#1
Garden Of Eden

As I walk through the garden,
I see my life pass me by,
I notice all my back stabbing and lies.

I see all the hate and the terror I stirred up,
All the people i corupted and ****ed over,
All of those times I wasn't sober.

I need something to slow the pain,
All these things I've done can't be good,
I don't regret... And I never would!

All the times I was never there,
Does the pain linger?
Is pain is so intense you can't feel your fingers?

I see the good times, I see the bad,
All those faces left in the past,
Those memories will be my last.

All those times you tried to kill me,
You never suceeded you were always too late,
Don't you know, you cannot kill what you did not create.

I need something to slow the pain,
All these things I've done can't be good,
I don't regret... And I never would!

I'm comming up to the gates,
As I do I realize it's not Heaven I should be in,
It's Hell where I come from, It Hell from where I sin!
#2
"Does the pain linger?
Is pain is so intense you can't feel your fingers?"

Rhyme sounds forced.

"You never suceeded you were always too late,
Don't you know, you cannot kill what you did not create."

I like the rhyme, but I don't really follow the message. Clarify please.
#3
^ this is the first time I have seen a CC {much less you} ever post in here!

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