#3
This is one of Satch's easier songs, but nonetheless amazing.

Technique: Well played for the most part, however there were a few mistakes in the small sections that require a burts of speed. Still, nothing a little practice can't fix. The bends were in key and the music flowed nicely, so good job there.

Tone: I didn't like the tone much at all. It seemed much more cloudy than it should have been. Satch's tone in this song is clearer but not too trebley. Anyway, the point is, I don't think the tone really worked.

Overall: It was a good rendition of an a great Satriani song. It wasn't perfect, but it was good. Nice job.

8/10
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#4
Hm, tone wasn't that great, as Smokey said.But it's not bad though.

Some parts seemed a little bit off the timing to me, but I could be wrong, I don't listen to this song a long while ago.

But the playing was very good man, good job.
#5
ya thanks for the input guys. i appreciate it alot. this is only my third song that i have recorded so it was all pretty new to me. i know what u mean about the tone, but i was just kinda too lazy to change it all again. and i think the timing was a little bit off at one part also. this was one of the first songs i ever wanted to play like 4 years ago when i was twelve, so to get fairly good reviews on it now is awesome.
#6
type as i listen

ahhh u need a much smoother tone, but the fact that u arent loading teh distortion on is good.

very good bending on those notes, this song is pretty easy, cept u play it well so far

ahh on teh chorus type part, u dont dont do the bends!??!?!/1 aghghhghg, that kills me, they made the whole song

the part where its on the 2 and 4s, u seem off timing

defenitly learn to bend the 17 on the chorus part, it has a completly different sound.

ahh u cut it short too!??! oh well, just work on the chorus part and ull have i down

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#7
The timing was a little off in some parts, other than that very well played. I didn't like the tone though, like others said. Good job overall.


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#10
oh ya, i already critiqued the one with the violin and stuff. that is why u crtiqued mine. remember?