#2
good quality, the singing is off key sometimes. its mixed pretty well, good riff transitions. well written, i liked it. only thing that needs work is the singing. good job though
#3
i agree with whats been said about the singing, it sounds off key in some parts
the playing sounds tight, good guitar and drums
i really like your tone, both clean and distorted it sounds pretty good
i also agree that its a well-written song, in terms of different sections coming together well and flowing into each other. i really like the solo at around 2:05. Overall, I think the only negative thing about this song is the singing, which seemed to get better as the song progressed. the rest i thought was pretty awesome

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