#1
My new song guys. Tell me what you think, it has a hidden meaning, so go figure.

ive got a plate with a horrible crack on its face
im thinking of selling it to the human race
but it isnt worth much
it just a plate mate

Plate, mate, whats your fate?
Sing into the fate plate mate!
See if you can get irrate
Love me love me fatey plate


so now that ive sold my plate, i feel lonely like a dog without a date
I asked my gran to put me on a blind date
but that was a bad idea
now ime not feeling great mate

Plate, Plate, PLATEY PLATE!
Find me a mole for my soul mate
Oh plate, love me great
Oh plate i feel like ghandi
Or more like my uncle Andy
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#2
Franz! Where have you been all this time?

Well anyway, this was... cool, yes, that's how to describe it i think.
It was an odd mix of meaning with fun, which sort of worked well but it was really weird on paper but it would be really cool as a song; hence my initial analysis. I did actually grasp the meaning but i'll spare you your privacy.

Two things though, i really thought that the whole "mate" thing was overdone regardless and the first line in the 4th stanza was too much...
Otherwise though, funky!

Mind critting my latest for me in my sig? Seeya round.
#3
Thanks cazguitardude. My computer is broken so im not on much man. Id like to know what you got from it, please, id appreciate it =]
xxx
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#4
A Magician does not reveal their secrets, and neither should anyone else; especially not me
Last edited by caz_guitar_dude at Aug 21, 2006,
#5
Im not a magician. Neither are you =D
Please i wanna see if you figured it out correctly. =]
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#6
Ok fine! But it's not about being a literal magician and you know it.
And remember, this is interpretation based.

ive got a plate with a horrible crack on its face
im thinking of selling it to the human race
but it isnt worth much
it just a plate mate
I'm thinking the plate is meant to be the world.
Plate, mate, whats your fate?
Sing into the fate plate mate!
See if you can get irrate
Love me love me fatey plate
Pleaing to the world
so now that ive sold my plate, i feel lonely like a dog without a date
I asked my gran to put me on a blind date
but that was a bad idea
now ime not feeling great mate
You've "sold" your world in which you used to live
Plate, Plate, PLATEY PLATE!
Find me a mole for my soul mate
Oh plate, love me great
Oh plate i feel like ghandi
Or more like my uncle Andy
Ghandi -trying to do good for the world
Uncle Andy - presumably not


Well, there's my personal interpretation of it.
#7
I totally agree with caz guitar dude. It sounds very nice, but seems a bit overdone on paper- especially that first line in the fourth stanza. I hate to be a parrot, but I agree with everything he's said (except I didn't find a really cool hidden meaning ). Nice piece overall, I like the general idea.

My dad's name is Andy...haha xD

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=418403
#8
Well i have to say, your iterpretation is pretty much right =] Nice one!
Il get to yer songs asap.

xx
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#9
i agree with caz_guitar_dude as well... so he must be right

dont get the hidden meaning though. something about your uncle? the first and second lines of the fourth stanza rhyme with the same word, and i have a thing about that, but i guess its just personal opinion.
#10
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Well i have to say, your iterpretation is pretty much right =] Nice one!
Il get to yer songs asap.

xx

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#11
Haha, damn right
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#12
Crit please! It has another meaning....

id love it if someone figured it out..
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