#1
mind the typos what do you'll think?

Young and Dumb:

when i was young
i had a friend
her name was julie
she was the best
we played all day
and all night
but then I never saw her again
then i got older
i came to relize
how much she meant to me

I was in love with you julie
but then you left me forever
i was young and so stupid
i never knew how much you meant to me

when i was young
i was naive
i though girls were cross
and had cooties
now i'm older and i relize
how much girls mean to me

I was in love with you julie
but then you left me forever
i was young and so stupid
i never knew how much you meant to me

when i was young
i was dumb
i thought we played doctor just for fun
but now i'm older and i relize
why you wanted to examyn me

you were in love with you julie
but then you left me forever
i was young and so stupid
i never knew how much you meant to me

now im older
and much more wiser
i know what you meant to me
you and me
were meant to be
so come back julie
come back to me

I am in love with you julie
please come back to me
i was young and so stupid
i never knew how much you meant to me


I am in love with you julie
please come back to me
i was young and so stupid
i never knew how much you meant to me
julie i love you!
Last edited by theuniquejimmy at Aug 21, 2006,
#2
hmmm i like it but i think you need some better like words and to leave a bit of mystery like dont come right out and say it

i mite crit better later but thats all i can say for now