#1
It's about a girl I got with that I've liked for awhile I thought she liked me but she didn't

Never Again

Yesterday's so far away
But tommorow never knows
I guess when it comes to me and you
Anything will go
In your eyes I see nothing
It's different then before
I've grown older and you've grown colder
I don't care anymore

I thought I knew you well
But I guess I was wrong
I've put up with this forever
It's just been way to long
So here's your goodbye
Cause it's time for this to end
I tried so hard to get you
I'll never try this hard again

I never noticed how big the sky is
Or how bright the moon could be
I thought I could see right through you
But there was nothing I could see
Now I can see right through your
Empty promises
I'm taking over and
Now I can see who this really is

I thought I knew you well
But I guess I was wrong
I've put up with this forever
It's just been way to long
So here's your goodbye
And it's time for this to end
I tried so hard to get you
I'll never try this hard again
#2
um

well

it's a little cliche

that word gets thrown around a lot, but i guess that's why something is cliche

you might want to consider expanding your vocabulary a little more and try adding some meaning to your songs. with this song, what is it supposed to be telling me? what am i supposed to be getting from it?
So turn off the lights cause it's night on the Sun....

if anything i say comes acrosss as pretentious, tell me what an asshole i am.
#3
I agree with loopdeloop. It's a little too cliche. All I get from this is that you've been staring at the sun a lot. Reading some of the stuff in here or maybe listening to a new band might help.
#5
Well, yeah, they might. But listening to new bands, even if they've got crappy lyrics can get the ideas going.
Can't say I was never wrong
But some blame rests on you


Work and play they're never okay
To mix the way we do