#2
The bassline is completely off.
RIP SYD
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#3
Yeah ^ Bassline is wrong, The drumloop is ear wrenching too. Try and make it a big lighter rather than a metallica cover. The lead sounds good though, try writing some riffs with the audio samples in it, get a techno/metal thing going on. Keep trying matey
#5
the bassline isnt off, its my version of the song. i didnt want a clone song. its hell march 3
#6
Nice excuse. You even wrote Hell March Cover.
RIP SYD
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#7
technicly its not an original is it.

anyone have anything CONSTRUCTIVE to say? apart from 'it sux lol'