Critique openly welcomed

Its not finished, ive got plenty to add, but i wanted to get feedback.

Im probly gonna be on the phone tonight so if I dont critic back right off, then I'll listen to you tomorrow
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Last edited by DDT at Aug 23, 2006,
I like it! It's my sort of music. One thing, It sort of starts to die a bit at about 1:20. Maybe practice getting that a little more spot on with less dead strings. I definately like what your trying to do there, it just needs to be executed a little better.

Also try recording the Guitar track first, to a metronome and overdub the vocals on. This way you can get the guitar spot on and then really concentrate on vocals to get them perfect (they were already good).

If you get a chance feel free to crit mine

Last edited by zedar at Aug 23, 2006,