#1
My friend tries to write lyrics now and then, and sent me some about me a week or so after I got out of a horrible relationship that lasted too long. Manipulative, lying, unbalanced, cruel, and controlling are just some of the words to describe this girl. I stayed with her for more than a year, and I was eventually cheated on...ohh at least 6 times. My friend always told met o get out of it and I wouldn't listen.

So he sent me some lyrics kind of based on it all, and I tweaked them up and added/deleted alot to make this. It's a very first attempt with really no music in mind behind it. Be harsh/gentle/critical I won't mind. Criticism will only help me improve if I ever try my hand at it again.

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Better make damn sure she's what you want
Cause she's gonna have your life tied in knots
Life past is no more
Friends turned their backs
Gave it up for some lying *****
Finally realizing what your life lacks
Only way back is out her door

Thought you had life figured out
Thought your darkness was all lit
Her soft whispers become a shout
She forces her needs right down your throat
And you bit her ****

So you can't let go, cause fear took hold
Don't want another to make her fold
You take all her crap and you force a smile
While you pray to God
That crap don't pile
As you force that smile you'd better nod
To her list of needs longer than a mile

Thought you had life figured out
Thought your darkness was all lit
Her soft whispers become a shout
She forces her needs right down your throat
And you bit her ****

Her lies and her **** become too much
You can't last being treated as such
All her lying and deceiting
Aren't nearly as painful
As the months of cheating
You question who's touch was much more gainful
Your heart just doesn't feel like beating

Thought you had life figured out
Thought your darkness was all lit
Her soft whispers become a shout
She told you it was just a "girls night out"
You bit then, and continued it
But now she's choking on her ****
#3
Agreed. But as I said it's a very first try...and at the time my emotion 95% of the time was anger and frustration. Giving a relationship everything you have for a year and a half and being cheated on more than 5 times usually causes lots of swearing :/