#1
I was making a song today and thought this part needed some revision. suggestions needed!
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song.zip
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Last edited by nexteyenate at Aug 23, 2006,
#2
I liked it, but the background piano riff gets annoying. I would say work on that part maybe make it disappear at times when the guitar riffs are interesting, because the lead guitar and piano sometimes clash and don't really harmonize well.
#3
it got a little repetetive, but i think as a whole it sounds pretty good, but the only thing i would say is try and get new rhythm and take it in a new direction, keep it going ya know, but crit mine if you get a chance, its just an idea, Remains of the Night, or any of the other ones in my sig, thanks!!!
#4
thanks for those suggestions. i made the piano part a little more interesting.
Quote by Killian5-0
I was looking at a friend of mines baby that was just born and I said "He's younger than me"

Quote by Rocker_geek
nexteyenate you win
Linux
#5
Hey! that sounded sick, i liked the piano mix..the only suggestion i can think of is maybe a long solo...im a solo freak dont listen to me !!!! lol