#1
Big waves break as we lay
on the beach and soak up some rays
while we hope that our days
together are just beginning

We lay there for hours
just talk and laugh
we dont need no one else
just the sun to set
so we can gaze at the night
and the stars that shine so bright

ooo When I'm with you
I lose track of time
cause you know that your
the only thing on my mind

Well we walk back toward
that beaten down path
and I ask,"Would you ever come back again?"
but you dont say nothing, just
nod your head and hold my hand

ooo cause When I'm with you
I lose track of time
cause you know that your
the only thing on my mind
#2
Quote by joeacoustic114
Big waves break as we lay
on the beach and soak up some rays
while we hope that our days
together are just beginning

First half of this verse is kinda cheesy to read, probally beter sung.


We lay there for hours
just talk and laugh
we dont need no one else
just the sun to set
so we can gaze at the night
and the stars that shine so bright

Nice

ooo When I'm with you
I lose track of time
cause you know that your
the only thing on my mind


Well we walk back toward
that beaten down path
and I ask,"Would you ever come back again?"
but you dont say nothing, just
nod your head and hold my hand

Favorite part and i dont know why?

ooo cause When I'm with you
I lose track of time
cause you know that your
the only thing on my mind


Pretty good overall.
Except the first half of the first verse.
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#3
thanks alot man and yea about that first half i just wanted to try something a little different