#1
She moves to the sound of the music, in the background
And she breathes like a beauty queen within, a broken frame
But I know that this can't be real it can't be
As perfect as it seems

She's lying right next to me
In my bed I'ill hold her, yes I'm afraid
Of loosing this tight grip, around her waist
Cause she means everything...
...to me

I know I've got no self-image, I'm conscientious and I know I'm sh**
But when I look into her eyes I know, I'm in paradise
She's the legend to my myth
But I always questions why she's here, and if she loves me
And why she even cares

She's lying, right next to me
In my bed I'll hold her, yes I'm afraid
Of loosing this tight grip, around her waist
Cause she means everything...

She's lying, right to my face
Oh god I was a fool to trust her

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acoustic
verse: E5 C5 G5 D5
chorus: D5 G5 C5 G5/E5

Open to criticism and comments
#4
The lyrics are too straight forward, remember a good song has many interpretations
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#5
These lyrics are really really good
Id really like to listen to it
#7
This sounds like a decent song, at least the way I played the chords with the words...but then again, I just went with a generic simple strumming pattern xD.

Sounds like a good song though.
#8
Yea, the chords are very generic, as is the strumming pattern. Very easy song for someone to pick up who just reads the post.