#1
When she walks with her hips boy
Everybody stares
They know her reputation but
Nobody cares

Shes the one that left you stranded
The one that got away
Shes the one that you love
But wouldnt stay

Smile on your face
From a wink in her eye
Cought up in the moment.
Time just flys by.

Shes the one that left you stranded
The one that got away
Shes the one that you love
But wouldnt stay

Shes the one that left you stranded
The one that got away
Shes the one that you love
But wouldnt stay


meh. . . . .i dont much care for it. in thought. . . . ..its deep and meaningful to me. tears me up inside.. . .. . .on paper. . . . . . its just. .. . .meh. . . . .i donno if i like it. it jsut doesnt seem to work. kind of childish maybe? i donno. . . jsut somthing about it isnt right at all. . . . .see....... the problem with this is.....im stuck on a girl and ive jsut got it in my head that until i write a song. . . . about the relationship we had. . . . .. . . .i wont be able to write any others. . . . so im kinda jsut pullin stuff out of my ass. . . . .
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Last edited by NotOneWithNames at Aug 24, 2006,
#2
On paper it's not too impressive, but with music it could sound pretty cool. Try and sing it sarcastically. And make the music seem regretting If you can.

I used to write songs about girls all the time but it just doesnt work for me, always sounded cliche, so now I write stuff about bigger issues that most people don't notice, you should try that.

Oh, and for a title, call it stranded because its the coolest word in the song.
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