#7
Quote by Schecter86
post a midi please, im afraid i dont have GP, lol, thanks!!!

I dunno how to take a midi.
#8
I didn't really like it. To me it sounded like a bunch of ideas put together, instead an actual "song". The solos were ok, but nothing really special IMO. I did like the intro though, with the synths. Other than that, I didn't really like it. Keep working though.

Quote by Snipy
I dunno how to take a midi.

Go to File, then Export, and then Midi...
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#9
Quote by chris_122
I didn't really like it. To me it sounded like a bunch of ideas put together, instead an actual "song". The solos were ok, but nothing really special IMO. I did like the intro though, with the synths. Other than that, I didn't really like it. Keep working though.


Go to File, then Export, and then Midi...

Thx for the crit and the suggestion, now there's the Midi in the zip aswell
Attachments:
In_componimento.zip
#10
this is one of those things where you need to here it on the guitar, lol, it got really repetetive, imo, but good none the less, i cant say anything else, sorry lol, but check my new idea out if you get a chance, Remains of the Night, or any of the other songs in my sig, thanks!!!
#11
Well....first...IT WAS GOOD !!! Second so long as it sounds good to u snippy its music..THE END lol
#12
Quote by Schecter86
this is one of those things where you need to here it on the guitar, lol, it got really repetetive, imo, but good none the less, i cant say anything else, sorry lol, but check my new idea out if you get a chance, Remains of the Night, or any of the other songs in my sig, thanks!!!

Thanks for the crit
Yes, it's a bit repetitive 'cause this song needs a singer
#13
I agree with Schecter86 that it is repedtive, overall I so the concept of it was good. I suggest you extending the riffs and changing them a little each time like first you do bar A then you do bar A1 which is altered then go back to bar A then do bar A1 then bar A2 ect...
#14
thats what i meant, it needs to be live with like a singer, lol, but what guitar breaker said^ is a good idea alsol, i liked it, cause i know if we heard it live it would be better, lol so its hard to judge correctly, ya know?
#15
Quote by Schecter86
thats what i meant, it needs to be live with like a singer, lol, but what guitar breaker said^ is a good idea alsol, i liked it, cause i know if we heard it live it would be better, lol so its hard to judge correctly, ya know?

hehe ye I know.
Btw it's hard to hear the palm muting in the midi file and other stuffs... so may be repetitive...
Btw, thx for the suggestions.
#16
I Did enjoy the intro and that one riff but it got repeated way tooo much. its nice and polished though so thats cool.
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#17
i agree that it was repetitive. although, if you had a singer and changed the endings of riffs around a bit, it would be more interesting. i couldn't really notice the electric rhythm guitar, but that might just be me. the solo was pretty good too. good use of whammy bar and harmonics.

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#19
Quote by darkfir3
it is sort of repitive, i really liked the solo though...it was a nice touch...keep it up man

Thanks
#20
The song seems to lack structure, but the synths were a good touch. Id like to see someone preform that keyboard solo, i never knew keyboards could do bends!
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#21
Quote by the_crimison
The song seems to lack structure, but the synths were a good touch. Id like to see someone preform that keyboard solo, i never knew keyboards could do bends!

Yes keyboards can do bends :p