#1
This isn't my best piece ever, I know...but there's something about it I like. Could be time of year...

Seeing Ghosts

She'll never love him like she used to.
He'll never have her like he used to.
Distance changes people,
And it changes minds too.
Distance makes hearts feeble,
And that makes it hurt you.

I never said goodbye,
Though you want to,
I never said goodbye,
I stayed at home.

He'll never love her like he used to.
She'll never have him like she used to.
Time can change our feelings,
And it changes lives too.
Time can help us heal things,
But also help hurt you.

I never said goodbye,
Though you want to.
I never said goodbye,
I stayed at home.
I never said goodbye,
Though you want to.
I never said goodbye,
I just stayed at home.

I'll always want her like I used to.
She'll always haunt me as she can do.
'Mon The Biffy!

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#2
Wow. This song left me in awe. I can really relate to these lyrics right now. I haven't read anything quite like it. I'm surprised to say that I'm deeply moved by it... The song definitely reached me at a level that nothing ever really has... well, other than Davey Havok's writing. I really hope to see more of this kind of stuff posted. And I disagree with you to the utmost extreme - I'd have to say this is the best piece by you that I've read. Honestly, keep it up. I'll keep my eyes peeled for more by you!

By the way, this part here:

I never said goodbye,
Though you want to,
I never said goodbye,
I stayed at home.

I loved. The way you used it in the piece was amazing and heartfelt. I liked the ending couplet as well. I'm pretty sure I felt a tear or two swell behind my eyes. Honestly, I've never read anything I could relate so well.
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