#1
This is my first real crack at songwriting, its a song about paranormal energy and how it controls our lives


Bm
The Power it felt so great,
F#
My Mind it felt so
A E
Bleak....

Bm
Never Seen The Rain Shine,
F#
But I have Heard It
A E
Speak....

E Bm F# A

F#
its so within us...
A
Eating At Our Insides
Bm
On A different level,
E
But I am feeling fine
X2


Bm
Worried Bout our bodies
F#
Worried Bout our
A E
Souls...


Bm
WTHe Depths of death and sadness
F#
Have taken their
A E
Tolls....

F#
its so within us...
A
Eating At Our Insides
Bm
On A different level,
E
But I am feeling fine
X2
#3
Nice piece, you wrote. I can't comment on the music (I'm a drummer), but I really liked the lyrics. The song did seem kind of short, so you may want to think about expanding it. But the flow and rhyming was such excellent. Great job

Crit mine please

Streetwalker
#6
I'm not really an expert at song writing, but man that was deep!

Sorta reminds me of Evanescence in a way...
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