#2
repetitive and boring for me, sorry.

make it heavier or more technical or something, it was just boring.
#3
I really did not like this. It was very boring, and didn't have anything interesting going on, except for a few time changes. The solo wasn't very good either, with no type of melody. To improve this, IMO you should probably learn some scales or something, and try to learn how to make some sort of melody. Keep on working though.
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