#1
Irk...

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I walk into a crowded room yet,
All I see is you,
The clock is ticking but,
My eyes are sticking,
There's no way they're leaving you,
No way they're leaving you,

I wake up and I walk to the door,
I can't say I've felt this before,
I wake up I been dreaming of you
Please say you dream of me too,
I hope you dream of me

All the pain in this world, darling
None of it gets to you,
We both know that's a lie ain't it, honey
But somehow you pull through,
You pull through,
You pull through,
And I want you,

I still walk into crowded rooms but,
I can't see you,
The clock's still ticking but,
My heart is sticking,
It's still stuck on you,
I'm still stuck on you,

All the pain in this world, darling
None of it gets to you,
We both know that's a lie ain't it, honey
But somehow you pull through,
You pull through,
You pulled me through,
And I need you
#2
I don't know what it is about these lyrics, but they really got to me. I absolutely loved it. Don't ask me why, but really, don't change a thing. Ooh, goosebumps... strange, that NEVER happens. I think it's 'cause it's easy to relate to and especially for me at the moment.

Seriously, great work, don't change it. I love it... in case you could tell.

I've got a song up there somewhere called Song To Kevin, if you wanna check that out and crit it, that'd be cool. Ta.

Ps, don't change it.