#2
do you have to register to hear it?
cuz it dont come up..=(
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#5
Crit while I listen...

Love the way it starts, has a nice melody. Jumped to a few places I wasn't fussed on. I like the chorus effect on the rhytham guitar. If this is indeed the start to a song, maybe start off a little less hectic? Draw the listener in, getting them begging for more, then give it to em...

Crit mine? - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=422741
and if you get some time, my second one. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=422756
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