#1
I wrote this song to be the theme song to my last band (called 4-20). But since we broke up, I've been deciding to rewrite it to fit my next band. I'd like to know what everyone thinks.


Welcome
My name is Mitch
I got beer in the cooler
And some pizza in the fridge

Now I've been stoned
For the past 3 days
Cause me and my friends
Been tripping on Purple Haze

We got Darrel in the corner
And he's looking mighty stoned
But he still can't figure out
How to work the telephone

Cause we need some take-out
And I'm thinking Chinese
If it doesn't get here quick
Then we'll lose our munchies

And every morning
We wake and bake
When the clock says 4:20
We take a smoke break

Now my good friend Micheal
Just doesn't have a clue
But when he wakes up in the morning
He knows just what to do

When we open the door
Out rolls a smoke cloud
Man he can roll a blunt
That'd make Cheech and Chong proud

Because every morning
We wake and bake
When the clock says 4:20
We take a smoke break

When it comes to connections
Lets not forget Drake
He can find the good ****
And not get any shake

Now don't get us wrong
Smokings not all we do
But we like to get high
Sit around and watch the tube

And every morning
We wake and bake
When the clock says 4:20
We take a smoke break

And every morning
We wake and bake
When the clock says 4:20
We take a smoke break

When the clock says 4:20
We take a smoke break
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#5
Quote by twittch
its funny, is it a ska song?



Thanks

I'm not sure yet, I never had a chance to put anything over it.
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#7
Quote by da ramones
I thought it was quite funny, but I thought 4:20 is the time to smoke not to take a break. Anyways it was ok but I don't think it would be good as an actual song.....



That's what a smoke break is, A time to go smoke

Yeah I think it should stay with my old band, even though it is catchy
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#8
i thought it sounded rather rap(ish) anyway not up my alley in what i listen to it was very well controled in that you didnt really lose your train of thought. its alright..... but is made for a click
#9
Thanks for the crit. Dude, this song was funny as hell. It's nice to see playful songs. They're a breath of fresh air. Plus I thought this one had excellent flow to it.
#10
Quote by Metal-X
That's what a smoke break is, A time to go smoke

Yeah I think it should stay with my old band, even though it is catchy



Oh yeah..... I understood it differently..... but I thought it was catchy
#11
It's pretty good.
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#12
I'm looking forward to this becoming a real song.


It's awesome........and makes me wanna smoke.
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