#1
Solitude is the key to being earnest at what we all want the most:
The ability to divulge into ourselves and not hate what we see.
But right now, I just want to smash my mirror in,
Because I look just like all the people I hate.
Right now, I wish I had the integrity to just sit and watch this story unfold.
That way I could have an anecdote with characters other than me.
I destroyed our friendship, I destroyed your smile, nothing will ever be the same again.


[Crit for crit, etc.]
Quote by soccermom
Of course eating unbelievable amounts of anything can probably harm you, but i chose bananas because they look like willies.
#2
I like paint fumes . The piece was okay, I guess. It could be a lot better. It sounds like you're just listing the idea(s) for it down as opposed to describing or trying to capture a feeling. If you could be a little more vague and play with the words a little this piece could be great.

P.S. Sorry, dude. I just read your sig and the llama thing made me laugh so bad.
Can't say I was never wrong
But some blame rests on you


Work and play they're never okay
To mix the way we do