#1
Tell me what you think....


I remember a girl from long ago
Where she is now I really don't know
I remember the day she left me behind
Left me here with no peace of mind
Yet when I'm alone and feelin cold
I hide in my thoughts to forget that day
Yet I dream of that girl I used to know
When I close my eyes she slips away

I walk through that day a million times
Watching every details for a sign
Of ways I could have stoped her going
All that while never knowing
Why it was she had to go
I wipe my mind to forget that day
Yet when I dream of that girl I used to know
I look in her eyes as she slips away

I can't come to give up on her
For that, I'm forever a goner
How I miss her warm, warm smile
When I've been lonely awhile
My pain is hard not to show
When I cleanse my thoughts and forget that day
But still dream of that girl I used to know
I break down as she slips away

Everyday she had me bent
To Dallas, Texas where she went
She never told me 'till the last
Killing the demon of me in her past
With her my dreams had to go
So I wipe my sorrow and forget that day
And stop dreaming of that girl I used to know
So I can close my heart and let her slip away....

Yeah, she slipped away.....
yeah, away.....
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#2
yea...hmm...if ur gonna rip off boston do it a little more subtly


second thought i hope this is a joke
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#3
well i have no clue what band boston is ... so if this is a rip off.. then wow, but otherwise I was going to say great work.
#4
ok not bad but kinda of lacking in depth I really don't feel drawn to the situation and you seemed to of force some rymes with to many simple cuples but still not to bad maybe just try ta put a little more emotin in it and not worry about making sure everything rymes rite on time just as long as it flows good and you get your point across
#5
look up the lyrics to "more than a feeling"...jackass
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What exactly is a powerchord?


Quote by laid_to_waste
My trouser snake is friendly. If you pet him, he might even do a trick! think I'm going to hell for that one.