#1
Just a frusturation taking out type of deal.
Not sure if I wanna keep it or not.
Anyway.
Song.
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Are you too busy for me?
You've got so much more to do.
Now I clearly see.
How you do follow through.
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Ill go home and think it over.
While you dont give a thought.
I know its past october.
And this lesson ive been taught.
Is killin me.
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Your the only one.
I'd trust anyway
Its still not through and done.
And Ill forgive it anyday.
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Ill go home and think things over.
While it doesnt cross your mind.
Its long passed october.
And these days I find.
Killin me.
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Ill forgive you all the time.
Ill forever call you mine.
For you I'd break the rhyme.
But with you everything is fine.
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Just think this over.
While I dont think at all
Its longer then we thought.
All you seem to find
Is killing me.
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Meant to reflect the thoughts going through my mind after a fight with my girlfriend, the initial frusturation, then forgiveness.
Yep.
Sappy, And angry at the same time.
Critique away.
The music and singing is semi nirvana style, think about a girl.
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#2
I really liked that. All the lines were nicely put together, and they fit perfectly. Your ideas were clear, and to the point. I also like the way you've presented it. Very neat with the little lines between the stanzas. Keep it up!
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