#1
Ok, so heres the first song I've written for my new band. It still needs an ending, and I'm no drummer so there aren't any drum fills at all....just a straight up punk beat. Tell me what you think. Also, if anyone wants to work on an ending or maybe play with the drums it would be awesome.
Attachments:
Swallow your smile.zip
#2
i liked it. what i would change is the little bridge type thing that happens about 1:24. but other than that it was great.

could you check out a recording for me? www.purevolume.com/rolemodel2
Its very crappy recording...but try to look passed that lol..it'll be hard but try.
#3
^Do you mean the part where it goes to the clean guitar? Or are you talking about the breakdown.
#4
just after the clean part...maybe because it sounds wierd because its midi..i dont know. it dont think it fits
#5
The breakdown......I don't know....I love that breakdown. I always thought it was cool. I'll consider revising it though. Thanks for the input.